八改错练习第四篇

专八改错练习第四篇:
Planning is a very important activity in our lives.
Itcan give
pleasure, even excitement, and it can cause
quitesevere heada
The most significant the task ahead, the more
required. Getting to school or to work on time is a
taskrequiring few .
or no planning, it is almost routine. A month’s
tour ing holiday abroad,
or better still, getting married, is a different
matter altogether. If the
“”…
and returning a new home, this requires even more
sure that it is successful. Planning is our way of
rying to ensure success
and of avoiding costly failures we can not suffer. It
aythedereeas_an
he scale may be
of importance does not. In the essence, a nation
planning its resources –
and needs do not differ from the familiar weekly
shopping or monthly
household budget. Both are designed to ensure an
adequate supply of
essentials, and if improperly carried out, will avoid
and over-expenditure.
參考答案及解析(反白可见):
or表示“或者”,因为前后是两种截然不同的可能性,所以
应该用or。
2将most改为more
3将few改为little
4将involve改为involves
因为主语the matter 为单数,例如:
Although planning involves material inves tment, even
虽然作机会应该包括物资投资,但最重要的是对人的投资。
5在returning后加介词to
6将suffer改为afford
7去掉be。
vary是动词,可与助动词或者情态动词构成谓语,也可以独
立构成谓语,例如:
aistrinte
in some mountain
8去掉the
主语是动名词复合结构a nation planning its resources
and needs, 应视为单数,例如:
Looking after chi ldren requires patience.
10将improperly 改为properly.

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