改错练习第二篇

专八改错练习第二篇:
One of America’ s most important export is hermodernmusic._ 1 American popular music is playing all over the world. It is enjoyed 2_
by people of all ages in all countries. Because the .
lyricsare English,_ 3_nevertheless people not speaking English enjoy it.
Thereasons forits popularity are its fast pace and rhythmic beat.
The music has many origins in the United States.

Country music,coming from the suburban areas in the southern United States,is one_ 4 source. Country music features simple themes and melodies describing
day- to-day situations and the feelings of country people. Many people appreciate this music because temotions expressed by country_ 5_ music songs.
A second odip orisin of American poular music is the blues. It depicted_ 6_ mosty sad felinis refletineg the difficult lives of American blacks. It is usually played;
is not popular with _ 7_and sung by black musicians, but it all Americans. Rock music is a newer formo music. This music style, featuring blues and country music. It is first knom 1950’s. Since then thoreorock rand- roll in the have been rock, punk rock, disco music and others. Many performers of popular rock music are young musicians. American popular musie is marketed to a demanding audi ence. MowW poular songs are heard on the adio several times a day. Some songs become these songs gnrar all over the world. People hear 。in their oial Buglish or soetimete translated into other languages. The words may coincide bulthe enjoment of the musicis universal. 10
参考答案(反白可见):
1改export为exports 6op作可数名词时指出口商品,同时根据。
of结构也可;
以知道这里export 要用复数结构动词play和句子主语American popular music是逻辑动宾关系,必须用被动语态.
3改Because 为Though或者ALthough此句为让步状语从句
4改suburban为rural乡村地区.地国属于间义用错。ourto为城市郊区、乡村音乐凝然来自
5改为because C
6改depicted为depicts
本向错在时态。句意为“blules 大黑人的艰难生活.”为与全+主于发展伤情感,反映美国blues 现在的风格依旧。时态致, 不能用过去时.此外,在时
7将not去掉
8改is为was用一般过时间状语in the 1950 s, 陈述过去的一个事实,故用一般过去时态
9改sing为sungsing可导过去分词短语作宾语补足语,表被动真思10改coincide为differ may后加not 也可以)
此句含有连诃but,整个句意含有转折语气专八改错练习第三篇:
Cities oan be fited ples. The morfo L The the population live innc’ massive tower blocks.
appear__ 2 _
1 of belonging to a comiy tends to
when you live thirty floors u
) in a skyscraper.
Strange_ 3_
o Mereee in the pu the iatiant of om
ste a knw each ohr. nmadao poplo on tho
flor in tor bloke e ay bll to ccn
other.
Country life
。n the other hand, difers from this

community
generally keep the inhabitants of a small village
er. People have the advantage of knowing that there
country life has disadvantages too. For example,
shopping becomes a major problem and for anything
dition to the nearest large town. The country has the
other.
Country life, on the other hand, differs from this
their main advantages is that you are at the centre
things and that life doesn’ . t come to an end even at .
tween the two: they expressed their preference for
quiet life by leaving for the city and moving to the
country within commuting distance of the large city.
参考答案及解析(反白可见):
1.把frightened改为frightening
frightened 是“受到惊吓的”,表明心理状态,而
frightening表示“令人害怕的”,表示事物性质。
2.把appear改为disappear
“当你住在摩天大厦的三十层里”,可以推测这里要表达的
是归属感的消失,而不是产生归属感。
3.把Strange改为Strangely
4.在say前面加上don’
此处说的是,现在住在同一-层楼的人甚 至见面都不打招呼。
5.把keep改为keeps
inthat引导的句子主语应该是asense,故谓语应为单
数。本句的意思是,农村生活与这种隔绝孤立的生活不同,因为
一种归属感把小村里的居民联系在一一起。
6.把so改为but/yet
上文提到了乡村生活的好处,下文是转折, 要用but或者
7.把for改为on
去找,努力获取,排
8.把peaceful改为peace
of后面不应该用形容词,所以应该改为peace。这里需要注
意的是quiet既是名词又是形容词,不要被迷惑。
9.把their改为its
此处的代词应该指代上文的the city。
0.删除leaving后面的for, 或者把for改为from
leave表示“离开某地”,而leave for 表示“离开某地去另

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